Background Of The Freestyle/Rhyme/Rap/Poem

The reason behind this rhyme is that i used to have a friend who always gave me
abuse for being in a relationship just because he could never get one of his
own, id have the usual insults like “loved up fool” and “whipped mess” but that
didn’t really bother me. Then after i split with my ex girlfriend he decided to
become friends with her and ditch me in an attempt to get into her knickers!
When this attempt failed he tried running back to me, well this clown doesn’t
associate with backstabbers 😉


When I’m loved I’m up,
Up out of bed getting whipped,
The whip is hard I’m out of bounds,
Above the ground but under the thumb,
Not dumb,
In a relationship, the ship is never sinking,
No point thinking,
It’s not gonna happen, crazy pattern,
Which you don’t like, get on your bike,
You have had your say, cycle away,
You just don’t like to see me happy,
Now im angry,
But your jealous, now good friendless,
Just a lonely person who needs to get laid,
like a middle aged woman with no man and no toys to play,
You could play with your xbox,
According to you my ex rocks,
Well you couldn’t be more wrong,
Then again two wrongs may make a right,
Both bad on my sight,
So i suggest you have a Muller Light instead of a kebab tonight,
Just some advice, I suggest you take it,
Making me irritated, Not anymore are you needed,
The only thing you need is a beating,
Like a heart, I hope it attacks, Fatal if that,
And if that happens I’m going to smile,
Cause the word on the street Karma’s been waiting for a while,
Now your fucked, outa luck,
I don’t care, Go over there,
Outa my face, As a friend your a disgrace,
Your the worst thing i’ve ever put my trust in,
I engraved it into you like you were my diary,
Then over that little slag you had to lie to me,
Do the sly to me,
Your never going to be forgiven,
Now its time for me to relax,
Ive just ripped up our friendship like its a piece of paper,
So cry me a river and go and drown yourself in it later!

A Freestyle By Corey Booth 25/10/11 🙂

8 comments on “Betrayal

  1. I’ve also been in a situation like this, but in my case I wasn’t over my ex yet, and she asked him out behind my back while she knew I was crying my eyes out 🙂 I still haven’t forgiven her (it’s a few years ago and I’m over it, but I could never trust her again) and I see that woman and my ex together every week in drama class 🙂

  2. Olive Tree says:

    you’re talking from your heart. all feelings are out in the open. raw, very raw. hope by now you can let go of the anger and have peace. keep on writing, friend. ~Olive Tree.

  3. i love your blog, i have it in my rss reader and always like new things coming up from it.

  4. Nel says:

    Hi clownponders (Corey)!

    I’m glad you left a trail on my blog so I can find yours. I like the honesty of this. It’s totally gritty.

    Small suggestion for this line: Outa my face, As a friend your a disgrace, (could be a typo but your would be better if it’s you’re).


    • clownponders says:

      Thanks for pointing that out! The reason for that is that i copied and pasted it off my Tumblr account and on there my spell and grammer check was correct! (Tumblr sucks) haha!
      Thanks for the comment i look forward to seeing more from your blog 🙂

  5. laciejay says:

    Very intense. I liked it, and I completely understand how you felt. People suck. Keep up the good work.

  6. Tomika Arter says:

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  7. very raw… my own experience in writing is that it is too easy to conjure up the basic emotions like jealousy, hate, love, envy etc. And more difficult to go with humor.

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