Prime (Free Verse/Writing/Style)

So I decided just to do a quick warm up rhyme before I started work on a poem idea that popped into my head earlier,  I have not posted one of these for a while now so some of my new followers might not know why I do these, all my free verses are just a quick little straight from mind to paper rhyme’s just to get the brain in gear before I start writing a poem, trust me try this before you start writing it really helps spark creativity! Anyway’s today I’ve been typing on the Laptop rather than writing on paper so I thought I would just copy and paste you the warm up rhyme! I shall post the poem I’m working on today tomorrow so make sure you come to check it out! Also remember this weeks “Poetry Challenge” is still up for this week so make sure you get your submissions in before Friday! – – – – > The Poetry Challenge 20/04/2012 – Week 6 – A Thing Of Beauty

Prime – Freestyle

I’m in my prime,
Writing a defined rhyme,
Fighting a designed crime,
The sighting said victory is mine,
It’s exciting and fine,
Typing this line,
Refining and guiding this time,
Combining and perfecting the line,
Just sublime,
Showing this poem,
Erecting, reflecting and growing,
Selecting, respecting and knowing,
That corrections are under-going,
Flowing and glowing,
Like the vision of a fire,
The recognition I require,
One day I’ll get the acquisition I desire,
I display more ambition as I get higher,
A better technician as I perspire,
Keeping motivation until I retire,
Until the end of the wire,
Until then take a seat,
I’m still blazing the heat,
I’m still raising your seat,
The thrill amazing the street,
Uphill never grazing defeat,
A skill that’s loud and never discrete,
I will fulfil I’m endowed in this beat,
Proud and here to compete,
I’m like a curse I cause stress,
Lines so diverse people feel hope-less,
Times will get worse more job-less,
A country in reverse but nevertheless,
Here’s a free verse for Word Press.

Warm Up Rhymes By Corey Booth

15 comments on “Prime (Free Verse/Writing/Style)

  1. dpbowman says:

    Hard to stop once the flow starts isn’t it? Cheers!

    • ClownPonders says:

      Tell me about it haha! Usually my quick freestyles end up to rude or offensive to put on here but this one seemed okay lol!
      Always nice to start off with some quick fire rhyming before doing some more serious stuff 🙂
      Thanks for the comment mate!

  2. marchpane81 says:

    Awesome rhythm! Keep up the awesome “floetry!” 🙂

    • ClownPonders says:

      Haha thank you!
      You can tell it’s a freestyle I’ve used the same rhyming words in some parts haha, only just noticed lol
      😀

  3. Udaya R. Tennakoon says:

    it is a nice style for the poetry. keep on

  4. i love it… great..!!

  5. doncarroll says:

    good one and it’s great for performance in front of the mic with the rhyme scheme.

  6. pulsating purity poetry! THANKS! Deborah

  7. 12kilroy says:

    You really do well with freestyle. I think it’s the wordplay that I like – it puts me in a good mood.

  8. atothewr says:

    I like your rhyming style. It has a nice flow to it.

  9. You do this so very well, Corey, nice read, lovely flow 🙂

  10. Melodiiee says:

    Omg!! Dude you is dope! And trust I know talent when I come across it! You are blessed with an incredible gift and talent, you are naturally gifted! Honestly I think your work will go along way, you have that ability to inspire young talents out there; impacting on their lives. I also am a freestyle poet so believe when I say a few gifted artists can truly inspire and impact a great deal on young minds!

    Keep at it,

    Bless

    Melodiiee x

  11. A better technician as I perspire,
    Keeping motivation until I retire,
    Until the end of the wire,
    Until then take a seat,
    I’m still blazing the heat,
    I’m still raising your seat,
    The thrill amazing the street,
    Uphill never grazing defeat,
    A skill that’s loud and never discrete,

    well, you certainly have an appreciative follower of your
    freestyle verse with me, and thank you for showing me the way
    to your poetry with your follow and likes today. 🙂

  12. Whoa , I wish someone could drop a beat to that. Epic poem right there !

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